I am a quite guy who is in 8th grade.
I wonder what i will be when I am older
I hear people screaming from out side
I see the computer
I want no homework
I am a quite kid who is in 8th grade.
I pretend , Wait i don't pretend
I feel my hands typing
I touch nothing
I worry about how much homework ill get
I cry when I brake a bone
I am a quite kid who is in 8th grade.
I understand summer is over
I say there should be no more school
I dream about stuff
I hope I will graduate
I am a quite kid who is in 8th grade.
did you mean to say "I wonder IF john will be quite
ReplyDeletedid you mean quiet or quite?
ReplyDeleteI second Rio and Alanna. What do you mean "I understand school is over?" What stuff do you dream about? How is John being annoying? I like your in the moment style of writing, but how can you give the reader more details that relate emotion?
ReplyDeletei like how you wondered if john will ever be quiet in that poem ha
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