Wednesday, September 1, 2010
These are the things I've never done
My legend is not going to the pyramids in Egypt to look for treasure and gold. As a kid not as a king dressed as an old man on the Arcata plaza, I have always wanted a friend named Santiago with sheep to be a Shepperd. Ive never seen or met a gypsy. Also Ive never been to Africa in a crystal shop. And this is the things Ive never done.
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Interesting approach as an anti-personal legend poem. It's like the dark side of Santiago, if he never left his shepherd life. How could you extend this with more emotion or regret? Try "these are the things I've never done".
ReplyDeletevery odd but cool and interesting. try to make it so it makes sence but besides that good job
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